Beta Manga Pages Scene One

from one manga artist to another, this is a very well made page, exept for the panel arangement,s distore the panels, think outside the box, use special effect, but not too many, and be aware of box, look at pages of publish mangas for inspiration, your inkart is amazing, and thats already half the battle when it comes to manga art, if you're into that kind of stuff, please stop by my gallery i have two mangas, one was set to be publish on feb 2008 but the company i worked for went backbroke. so now i'm freelanzing. Good luck in the future.